BellaCanzone
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Joined: Feb 15, 2008
Posts: 6
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| Posted: Fri Feb 15, 2008 1:25 pm |
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hey...this is my first attempt at writing lyrics so could be totally rubbish but please tell me what you think....still not sure what to call it any suggestions?? i'm not to good at the rhyming lyric thing so i've not done it lol...anyway here's the lyrics:
verse 1:
I took your word, I kept it tight.
But I’m still waiting here for you.
Just change your mind, how hard can it be?
Coz’ you know this is right...
Chorus:
You didn’t realise the distance...
It was Just so far, breaking my heart...
And now it’s over, now you’re gone.
All I want is for you to hold me one last time...
Like before...
verse 2:
It’s been weeks.
It’s been months.
I can’t hold on any longer.
Where is your answer, calling me back...
I’m still waiting...
Chorus:
You didn’t realise the distance...
It was Just so far, breaking my heart...
And now it’s over, now you’re gone.
All I want is for you to hold me one last time...
Like before...
verse 3:
I need you now more than ever.
I can’t do this on my own.
( I miss you...)
Me and you, we’re like a twisted love story.
But I love you.
Chorus:
You didn’t realise the distance...
It was Just so far, breaking my heart...
And now it’s over, now you’re gone.
All I want is for you to hold me one last time...
Like before...
Interlude envisioned
verse 4:
What more can I say?
I don’t understand. And you don’t help!?!
You will realise...maybe (pause)
...one day.
I guess it’s the end (pause)
For now....... x3
(All I want is for you to hold me one last time...
Like before...)
thanks for looking what do you think?? |
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