pennylane28
ubw newbie
Joined: Feb 04, 2008
Location: germany( i'm not german)
Posts: 3
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| Posted: Mon Feb 04, 2008 5:08 pm |
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This is just the first verse of my song. i wanted to get some feedback on it. i know its not much but just tell me what you think of my lyric style, good or bad.
so honest and suffering slightly
You don’t have to think anymore
All the memories, who cares what they might be
Linger away
And decide who it is your living for |
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