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Cielx2
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Joined: Sep 10, 2004

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Posted: Fri Sep 10, 2004 9:20 pm Reply with quote

Hey I'm a peruvian r&b singer and I'm doing an album called C-15, it's nothing professional (tho I try to make it sound as professional as I can), and I don't plan to sell anything I'm just doing this for fun and for my friends. It'd be cool if I could climb the r&b charts I'm currently at #4

http://www.unsignedbandweb.com/modules.php?name=RhythmBlues

Visit the chart and listen to the song, I know you won't get a thing of what I'm saying tho Razz I've tried to make the accent go but it won't! You have the lyrics so you can read them. Thanks and tell me what u think!

http://www.unsignedbandweb.com/music/bands/613/

edit: direct link to your band page - unproject -
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ImL
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Joined: Jun 25, 2004
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Posted: Sat Sep 11, 2004 5:37 am Reply with quote

Hi Cielx2

Just listened to 'Fireflies' and really like it man. The bassline goes perfectly with your voice and what a smooth voice.
I do have a couple of points, however, it does get a little boring around 4:00mins as your vocals seem to take over a bit.
You can safely shave some time off in the middle somewhere or take a 30sec. vocal break. Was hanging out to hear your total voice range cos you've got a great sound.

Overall I really like Fireflies and think you should definetly keep making music.
Good job. hope to hear some more soon
ps: you're at #2!
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minusme
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Joined: Jan 25, 2004
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Posted: Sat Sep 11, 2004 5:47 am Reply with quote

Ciel.

You have a great voice!!!! I just listened to "fireflies" ...

I really like the "dreamy" quality of the song and the smooth rhythm to your music!

Great to have you at the unsigned band web!!!!

Ron
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unproject
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Joined: Jul 01, 2004
Location: Turkey
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Posted: Sat Sep 11, 2004 6:14 am Reply with quote

hi and welcome to the unsignedbandweb. i double (triple?) the previous comments about your tracks, keep 'em comin!!!!

peace. Cool
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