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Aubrii
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Joined: Aug 21, 2005
Posts: 152
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| Posted: Mon Sep 04, 2006 12:03 pm |
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Verse one
She's got her black hair in her eyes,
keeps her head down all the time
she's got no friends to speak of
and no one to talk to
She's got a future that is bright
but her income's a little too tight
she's got all her hobbies
and that's all she understands
Chorus
And they say, "She's such a loser"
and she thinks, why did they chose her
all she wants is to be accepted
but she's used to being rejected
and she hopes that one day they'll see
the beautiful girl taht she can be
and she wants to be accepted
she just wants to be accepted
Verse two
She's got an above average GPA
but she can't get a homecoming date
she's got no past of drinking or drugs
but the same could be said for kisses and hugs
she's got her writing to help her vent
and used to draw wherever she went
she's got the makings for a great talent
but no one to share it with
Chorus X2
And they say, "She's such a loser"
and she thinks, why did they chose her
all she wants is to be accepted
but she's used to being rejected
and she hopes that one day they'll see
the beautiful girl taht she can be
and she wants to be accepted
she just wants to be accepted
Ending
and they say, "she's such a loser"
and she wonders why they'd chose her
she just wants to be accepted
she just wants to be understood
-Aubrii
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minusme
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Joined: Jan 25, 2004
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| Posted: Mon Sep 04, 2006 11:39 pm |
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Thanks for sharing this really well written poem Aubrii! I really like the emotion and clarity you convey here, and I'm sure many people will appreciate your sense of melancholy . Well done. |
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TheWhisper
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Joined: Sep 05, 2006
Location: USA
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| Posted: Tue Sep 05, 2006 5:20 pm |
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I like your style.
How long have you been writing? |
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Aubrii
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Joined: Aug 21, 2005
Posts: 152
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| Posted: Tue Sep 05, 2006 8:31 pm |
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only about a year and a half, thanks  |
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