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RiCterMan
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Joined: Jun 10, 2005
Location: Madison, OH
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| Posted: Mon Jul 17, 2006 1:58 am |
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Hey everyone...,
I was thinking about everything again last night, and some new lyrics came out as a result of those thoughts. The words pretty much explain themselves.
"Six Word Summary"
-Rick, "RiCterMan," Strayer, fecit.
Consequence is breathing down my neck.
Consequence is breathing down my neck.
Consequence is breathing down my neck.
Consequence is breathing down my neck.
(Pre-Chorus):
Heavy and thick-
this stale air exhaled from circumstances.
Striking in silence,
it echoes my past discarded chances.
(Chorus):
Sigh..., my
summer eyes, can summarize
it all within six words;
six, surrounding and pounding words:
Consequence is breathing down my neck.
Consequence is breathing down my neck.
Consequence is breathing down my neck.
Consequence is breathing down my neck.
(Short to Moderately Long Interlude)
Consequence is breathing down my neck.
Consequence is breathing down my neck.
Consequence is breathing down my neck.
Consequence is breathing down my neck.
(Pre-Chorus)
(Chorus)
Consequence is breathing down my neck.
(Short Interlude)
(Pre-Chorus)
(Chorus)
Consequence is breathing down my.......
EnD
The words look very repetitive written out, but I write them the way that I hear them inside. It's what I was going for, so I'm not concerned. Later...
--RiCk->* |
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over-drive
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| Posted: Mon Jul 17, 2006 11:04 am |
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It does sound repetitive but it works both ways, for these lyrics it works, drilling the idea into your head sort of thing. |
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ohmygoshmike
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Joined: Aug 09, 2006
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| Posted: Sat Sep 02, 2006 2:15 pm |
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this sounds like it would be a great deathmetal/hardcore song.
what was your intent? |
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RiCterMan
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Joined: Jun 10, 2005
Location: Madison, OH
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| Posted: Fri Oct 06, 2006 7:36 pm |
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Not to throw an insult to death metal or anything, but I definitely wasn't intending to write something of that musical nature.
My intention for this was something kind of slow, somewhat dark, somewhat psychadelic, but all at once, beautiful. It looks like it was written as some kind of sad anthem or something, but really, it's more about the fact of the matter that I am living in the consequences, and my attempt to shove it out to others so they know that actions (or lack there of) can lead to brutal consequences.
I hope that makes sense, and I thank you for the read. Later! |
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