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Pacheco
ubw newbie
Joined: Aug 21, 2004
Location: Maracaibo, Venezuela
Posts: 26
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| Posted: Thu Aug 26, 2004 6:43 pm |
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"SWEET ANGEL"
I know I'm not perfect
but you know that no one could love you like I do
I'm just asking you for a chance
my soul is suffering this regret
because of all the mistakes I have made.
Help me to leave it all behind,
but don't let...
The pain kill me
don't let me fall in the loneliness of this void
that only you can fill.
I miss you, my days are delaying
and the imposing anxiety embraces me
I need your warm heart to protect me
from the cold environment.
This has been left by your absence
just let me in one more time,
but don't let...
The pain kill me
don't let me fall in the loneliness of this void
that only you can fill.
Come back to me sweet angel, and we'll start everything again,
you are the one who lights my road, don't leave me again.
http://www.unsignedbandweb.com/music/bypass |
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minusme
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Joined: Jan 25, 2004
Location: New York
Posts: 3648
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| Posted: Thu Aug 26, 2004 7:11 pm |
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Wow Pacheco, those are some deep lyrics, and VERY well done!
I love the lack of "cliche" and the serious to the point depth to your writing!
My favorite line is:
| Quote: | I miss you, my days are delaying
and the imposing anxiety embraces me
I need your warm heart to protect me
from the cold environment. |
Well done!!!
Ron |
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unproject
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Joined: Jul 01, 2004
Location: Turkey
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| Posted: Fri Aug 27, 2004 11:06 am |
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nice nice nice, i am not an english expert though. but, oh well...  |
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Pacheco
ubw newbie
Joined: Aug 21, 2004
Location: Maracaibo, Venezuela
Posts: 26
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| Posted: Fri Aug 27, 2004 9:04 pm |
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well neither are we! we're from Venezuela. We speak spanish but we decided to write sum songs in english. Sweet Angel was composed by our singer.. I wrote the song "You", also available here at UBW... I believe the songs are fixed now that I changed the files for sum new ones...
I think the cool thing 'bout our songs is mixin' the deep llyrics with a little metal... listen to them and tell me wot u think...
Here's "You"... enjoy...
"YOU"
Indulge my eyes with the figure of your love in body
I'd sink in your lips if you weren't by my side
I'd die in your tears if you would ever leave me
but I know that you'll never leave my mind.
I can't stand being apart from you
God know that you're my true love
but I can go trough this all again
it seems my will is just not enough.
I could just live in the memory of your smile
but I wouldn't bear losing you
just give me the pleasure of watching you sleep
don't wake me from the sweet dream that's loving you.
I can't stand being apart from you
God know that you're my true love
but I can go trough this all again
it seems my will is just not enough.
This thing is bigger than you and me
I haven't run out of faith yet
you're the one who changed my life
nothing will take this love away.
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