RiCterMan
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Location: Madison, OH
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| Posted: Sat Apr 08, 2006 5:16 am |
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This came about because of a lot of the same shit being thought about again yesterday. It's different, and vocally, it has a lot more emotion in it than a lot of lyrics I've written. The title is "Life, Not So", and I hope some of you find it interesting...
"Life, Not So"
I drive a nice car...
I have a nice flow of green, coming to me.
Yeah, I'm livin' the life,
you might say.
-A place of my own.
-A million and one friends, kind, but in envy,
'cause I'm livin' the life.
(change in music, and change to a slower tempo, envisioned, along with momentary deep humming)
I could pretend all these things,
if I wanted a harder
daily slap to the face.
It leaves me with this steady, ongoing sting,
and I'm much more...,
though I live less.
No, I know I'm not limbless,
but I feel like an amputee...
(Short Interlude, envisioned.)
(Chorus):
-And real life is a fantasy.
I'm in life, but it's life not so sweet.
This brutal fantasy
shows life, not so..., yet at all.
(Moderately Long Interlude, envisioned.)
(within Parenthesis = background vox, envisioned)
I'm livin' the life
(that I, designed.)
I'm livin' the life
(that I, designed.)
I'm livin' the life
(that I, designed blind.)
I'm...
livin' the life.
<7x>: -Livin' the life.
-Paying the price of blind design.
EnD
If ya' got any words on this, leave 'em. I think I have one more to post, that I forgot about recently, but I must go check. Heheh... Later, everyone!  |
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RiCterMan
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Joined: Jun 10, 2005
Location: Madison, OH
Posts: 742
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| Posted: Tue Apr 11, 2006 5:27 pm |
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This is another case of it being better vocalized. Vocally, I'd say I like this one a lot, as compared to a lot of the stuff I've written. If I can ever get somethin' together and record some stuff, I'll definitely post it on here. Thanks for the reply. Later! |
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