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deltarain
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Joined: Aug 18, 2005
Location: In my room, listening to loud music, playing guitar.
Posts: 132
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| Posted: Mon Aug 22, 2005 11:00 am |
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All these things are running
through my head.
Close my eyes- get this tight
feeling inside- I'm so damn
high- I could touch the sky.
These things are sweet- these
things I feel- feeling great,
feeling free- It's like fuckin
Ecstasy!
Can't wait- tonight's the night!
On my own- nothing and
nobodies gonna stop me
now! I'm ready for
anything- bring it on!
I'll take you on anytime!
so fuckin ready- so
fricken high- so damn
free- This is fuckin
Ecstasy! |
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deltarain
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Joined: Aug 18, 2005
Location: In my room, listening to loud music, playing guitar.
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| Posted: Mon Aug 22, 2005 11:01 am |
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I actually quite like it- wrote it last night while listening to Longview/ Green Day. And no I was doing the drug. Just happy.. please don't steal it- this is the first one I've actually enjoyed writing and am pleased with. |
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amazonblonde
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Joined: Jun 16, 2004
Location: Detroit
Posts: 331
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| Posted: Mon Aug 22, 2005 11:59 am |
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cool man.. is this a rock song? |
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deltarain
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Location: In my room, listening to loud music, playing guitar.
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| Posted: Mon Aug 22, 2005 12:00 pm |
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yeah- anything you think could be fixed? I'm trying- 13 and trying to make it big! |
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amazonblonde
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Location: Detroit
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| Posted: Mon Aug 22, 2005 12:02 pm |
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you are 13? What is the song about? |
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deltarain
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Joined: Aug 18, 2005
Location: In my room, listening to loud music, playing guitar.
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| Posted: Mon Aug 22, 2005 12:16 pm |
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I was really f-ing happy- one of those times when you're thinking about everything that could ever happen that's good- meeting your favorite band, succeeding at something hard(and watching people you don't like have trouble! haha! Just kidding!) I don't why, but Green Day's Longview really inspired me on this- They're bored and have nothing to do in their song- we've got the world ahead of us in our's. I liked writing it- my arm cramped- but I like writing it! |
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deltarain
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Joined: Aug 18, 2005
Location: In my room, listening to loud music, playing guitar.
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| Posted: Mon Aug 22, 2005 1:19 pm |
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Oops- just realized I said no I was doing the drug- I meant I wasn't! wow. Good reviews so far... Kinda glad cuz I love the way I did this song so much.. |
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zeo211
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Joined: Aug 22, 2005
Posts: 26
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| Posted: Mon Aug 22, 2005 7:42 pm |
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haha i love how you said they were bored, ohh ya its me your bassist, well its really bout mastrabation and how nuns were like you cant do it! it makes you blind!! all the guys at my school would rather be blind instead of stop... |
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deltarain
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Joined: Aug 18, 2005
Location: In my room, listening to loud music, playing guitar.
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| Posted: Mon Aug 22, 2005 8:20 pm |
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LOL! That made my day! But it's not actually about that.... will it really make you blind? |
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deltarain
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Joined: Aug 18, 2005
Location: In my room, listening to loud music, playing guitar.
Posts: 132
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| Posted: Mon Aug 22, 2005 8:24 pm |
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ah crap yes it is..... Fuddrucker's food really kills brain cells- thought you were talking about the song I wrote..OMG I'M A TARD!!! |
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guitarist
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Joined: Aug 20, 2005
Location: Sydney, Aus
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| Posted: Mon Aug 22, 2005 11:13 pm |
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sweet song very catchy you put sum good guitar and drums to that it could be awesome |
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Bullet41
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Joined: May 22, 2005
Location: Bracknell
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| Posted: Tue Aug 23, 2005 8:05 am |
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| deltarain wrote: | | yeah- anything you think could be fixed? I'm trying- 13 and trying to make it big! |
Am 13 too |
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deltarain
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Joined: Aug 18, 2005
Location: In my room, listening to loud music, playing guitar.
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| Posted: Tue Aug 23, 2005 8:09 am |
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I've realized how many 13 yr olds there are here- a friggin load! My bassist joined the site yesterday- zeo211. We're on our way! She told me maybe playing this or Livewire like Jimmy Eat World's Get It Faster, with all the distortion and stuff.... I think that'd sound friggin awesome! WE're also trying to find band names, so any suggestions.... |
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Bullet41
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Joined: May 22, 2005
Location: Bracknell
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| Posted: Tue Aug 23, 2005 8:18 am |
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What about Every Porn Is Creepy |
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deltarain
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Location: In my room, listening to loud music, playing guitar.
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| Posted: Tue Aug 23, 2005 8:24 am |
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Dunno- is that a song? If so who's it by? Never heard of it... |
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