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En-En
ubw rookie
Joined: Apr 30, 2005
Posts: 81
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| Posted: Mon Aug 22, 2005 1:10 am |
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my shit chak it outa
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- Ay guys chek wat i got in here
(me as lil kid) oh it's tupac, his new album "Al Eyez On Me"
+ dammm he's hot
(me as lil kid) Yea he is, come on man tak da tape in da walkman wit da loudspekers
- Ok hold on i gon open it
+ Come on, come on Keny we'r diein to hear it {tape gets in}
- here we go {Pac}
evrybody got to rit November 21 1996 wel today we'll lorn some meth(mess)
but teacher its not mess its meth
stand up natters and come to da desk, smart arse
and teacher it's not smart arse it's smart ass
enaf now sit down and stop interaptin me clas, no 1'll distarb dis leson
so open your ears and lesen
but teacher teacher
and no buts shut your maf up and stop feelin your nats
i gota go to da restroom can i ?
no natters and imidiatly tak your sit
f**k you b**ch i gota piss
ok natters just don't misssss....
dat's how i spent my elementery school wit a fuckd up teacher
who was goin tro al dis years wit da sam rule
"use your brain ot i make you loose it"
f**k it i already lost it and i aint need you to tell me howstupid i am
ay Semon it's 2004 wat's rongg
yea i now and i don't need a student to tel me wat year it is, i'm on
and watch your fat ass befor it brak enader cher or desk
natters how rud from you, tak your ass up and go out of da clas i don't want to see you
as you wish Gaint just hit us back wen you'r on WWE fine?
my weit is not an subgect to discas to mute or get out of da clas
i beter out der's no chiks to chil down
and Mr.Natters tak your only pan and paper and don't come back you'r cleard
owww finalyi was waitin fo it sinc i'm hereeee....
2X hook
As da world turns my dick grows
I'ma mak you suck it wit my boz bals
I'ma mak you blow and lexically like me
yo i'm out wat can i do now
ay maybe i see kety and chil her down or make branda get down
and make her suck my dick as sily machin wil al da dudes watch it
and lasbians tryna punch me push me away and mak it Lesbian Sex Pary
"oh yea come on b**ch come on suck it yea b**ch suck it"
i havnt seen het in such good form and so exaited abot 2 years
sinc she got f**ked by me in da ass and nearly lost her silicon chast {hahaha}
yo f**k it, i'm off i'm goin by my rid wat da f**k i got none
i dont even got cash to go by bus home, gota go by foot {nooo...}
i'm goin, i'm bawlin cant stop falin
i'm trid of dis fuckin smal bag of da garbeg can wit my clozes in
i cant stop tinkin, she swolowd my dodo lik it was nono {swolow}
ah shit i like lost my dick in her maf or prabably it was lungs
anyways i'm here two steps from da front door
"ay mom i'm home"
"alrit rabit you havent let me now, go to your room and dont out"
"but mom i'm goin out wit kety"
"i dont want to hear you, do as i sayd or go out and dont cam back"
"b**ch i wish you gon brak your had"
"wat did you sayd?"
"i sayd i gota go to bedddddd...."
yo now i'm at my plac ritin shit abot my fuckd up days
my mom fuckin wit her hasbend i dont realy now his name coz i dont realy now da last 1
so f**k it, i hat em. i hat my mom and da fuckin hous we livin in
i'ma say it now, buzz it coz i'm da man who cous it
2X hook
As da world turns my dick grows
I'ma mak you suck it wit my boz bals
I'ma mak you blow and lexically like me
Bad Boyz Neva Di |
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IbAnEz05
ubw newbie
Joined: Aug 20, 2005
Posts: 11
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| Posted: Tue Aug 23, 2005 6:56 pm |
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it sounds alot like eminem in his first album. Im not much of a rap listener but its alright i guess. You could use a few more rhymes and a metaphor at the end. Well PEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA CCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCC EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEE.
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En-En
ubw rookie
Joined: Apr 30, 2005
Posts: 81
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| Posted: Wed Aug 24, 2005 12:57 am |
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aait first of al i aint mak shit like fuckd up m maybe it sonds in da stil but i dont giva f**k
coz i aint hear dis b**ch and not gona hear him so f**k it
aait i'ma work on da end wit mo rims and abota metafors man it aint no jam wit calin nams so i aint need no metafors i just need mo rims a lil bit and dat aait
Bad Boyz Neva Di
and if dey r dey comin back resuracted |
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IbAnEz05
ubw newbie
Joined: Aug 20, 2005
Posts: 11
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| Posted: Wed Aug 24, 2005 2:23 pm |
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First of all i dont got time to ebonic all the shit that u just said. Dude bascially i dont no what u r saying. And if u didnt want the adevice than y did u put ur song up there. All im saying is that it need work. Its just suggestions u dont have to use them but next time u put ur rookie ass songs on the web at least make them good at least listen to people when they have comments about how lame ur shit is. SO f**k OFF. UR A LITTLE GANSTER FAGET GO DUCK UR MOMS COCK
BY the way ur a weak ass writer
PUSSY
PUSSY
PUSSY
PUSSY
PUSSY
THATS WHAT U R b**ch |
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En-En
ubw rookie
Joined: Apr 30, 2005
Posts: 81
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| Posted: Fri Aug 26, 2005 12:18 pm |
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ayo b**ch dick pusy first of al i sayd dat i agree and i gota rim mo as ya sayd
second of al yi aint no g fuckin bg ass
lil fuckin midgit ya can keep sayin shit b**ch but ya shit is wack madafucka
ya playin da tug b**ch but yar pusy
ya aint no big bad wolf so keep ya maf shut
im fuckin trid of madafuckas fuckin on me wat ya dreemin to be rocker or 50 phhh
wateva ya dreemin i hop ya gon get kild befo ya got reles ya demo
and if ya not so im gona com wit my crew and b**ch ya den bury ya in ya mams flower grond
if ya wonda why evry1 can ya b**ch nah i dont phhhh
ya beta get out befo ima disin ya ass of |
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