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IbAnEz05
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Posted: Sat Aug 20, 2005 5:14 pm Reply with quote
this is my first song that i have written. Please send info back to me about it. Thanx Very Happy

Darkness

Light fades into Darkness
Streams of rage ignite
Smoke and fire blast into night
Here it comes, here it comes
Mighty rage comes on me now

Crashing bolts
Crashing bolts
Strike at me now
What to do
What to do
Death looks upon me now

Gates of heaven look at me now
Open up
Open up
Look at me nnnnnnnnnnnoooooooooooowwwwwww
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ZOMBIECORE
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Posted: Sun Aug 21, 2005 7:40 am Reply with quote
Lyrically its pretty cool but its more of a poem than a song. Nice though!!
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MANTISMAN2005
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Posted: Mon Aug 22, 2005 5:56 pm Reply with quote
I LIKE THE WAY YOU PUT THE LYRICS, ME AS A RAPPER I REALLY DONT KEEP MY LYRICS TO JOT DOWN LIKE THAT, BUT ITS SEEM GLOOMY, I LIKE GLOOMY LYRICS,
PINK FLOYDISH TYPE. ANYWAY GOOD LYRICS. (ONE)

PSYCHO MANTIS http://www.unsignedbandweb.com/music/PSYCHO%20MANTIS
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deltarain
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Posted: Mon Aug 22, 2005 8:52 pm Reply with quote
Sounds like something System of a Down would sing. I'm not too fond of it..
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IbAnEz05
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Posted: Tue Aug 23, 2005 2:55 am Reply with quote
Thanx for all the comments Very Happy
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