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Bullet41
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Joined: May 22, 2005
Location: Bracknell
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| Posted: Mon Jul 18, 2005 8:57 am |
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While i get older
my lilife seems longer
now that am getting colder
am getting stronger
"is it because am such a insect"
everything seems dark
"so dark"
What am i to myself
i dont fit in with anyone else
i dont fell like a human i dont fell like a reject
i just feel like an insect
Please leave me be i dont need more of your hatred
"because i know you do"
you hate me because am different
"i know you do"
its no suprise you all wanna kill me
"why dont you all just leave me be
before i let myself get killed
what am i to myself
i dont fit in with anyone else
i dont feel like a human i dont feel like a reject
i just feel like an insect
wake me up from this dream
"i cant be an insect am just a boy"
please wake me up from this dream
"before i i go insane"
i cant feel any pain
"this is not a dream"
what am i to myself
i dont fit in with anyone else
i dont feel like a human i dont feel like an reject
i just feel like an insect
am i an boy
or am i an insect
By Bullet41
from the band X-Unit |
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minusme
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Location: New York
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| Posted: Sun Jul 24, 2005 1:22 pm |
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I agree this is better than the prt 1! You have continued with the elements that I do like, and there is less that I get stuck on. Well done!!!
Were the two written back to back or was there some time in between??
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Bullet41
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Location: Bracknell
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| Posted: Sun Jul 24, 2005 1:30 pm |
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Well when i first wrote pt1 i was like to myself wouldnt it be cool if there was an pt2.So i wrote it and i was like cool.I recon when we do conserts am gonna put pt1 and 2 into one song. |
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RiCterMan
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Joined: Jun 10, 2005
Location: Madison, OH
Posts: 742
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| Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2005 8:38 pm |
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I agree with Ron. This is an imporvment from part 1. Like I said when I replied, part 1 was really good. I'm just saying this is an improved addition to it. -Quite cool, man. Cheers!
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