dirt
ubw newbie
Joined: Jul 07, 2005
Posts: 23
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| Posted: Sun Jul 17, 2005 3:29 pm |
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im not to sure about this! It apears to obvious. Also it doesn't realy sound like a tribute, more like an account of what happend. But maybe you should get some help from a proper lyricist rather than just myself! The idea behind this song is a good one and i liek your thinking! When you've revised the lyrics I'd like to hear it within a song context! |
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RiCterMan
ubw luminary
Joined: Jun 10, 2005
Location: Madison, OH
Posts: 742
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| Posted: Sun Jul 17, 2005 6:26 pm |
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If you (everyone) don't know already, I live in the U.S., and on top of saying the song is good, I'd like to express my condolences to anyone affected by those events. It's pretty annoying to me, that many idiots in the world feel good about fulfilling these planned out, atrocious actions. Those kind of people are the stain of the present world, and honestly if you could point out every person like that, in the world (impossible), I'd be half tempted to say that genocide would be necessary. At the same time, I realize that genocide is mass killing, and that is exactly what those people are trying for, when they plan these acts. If it were possible, and we did what they try to do, and sometimes succeed in doing, how much better would we be than them? Anyway, back to my response to the song lyrics.
To me, this song seems to be perfect. -Maybe not perfect as far as others think, but for you, I think you wrote this more on the basis of expressing yourself. In that case, it really doesn't matter how it's written, as long as it fulfills the idea behind self expression. Then, that makes the song perfect, in the eyes of you, the writer. I'm kind of using the word perfect in a way that can't be defined by it's known meaning. I guess, what I mean by saying "perfect to you" is that it is satisfactory, in regards to the purpose you had in writing this. So, good job.
Once again, to everyone affected, I do send my condolences, but I know you'll all get through this. I've heard about that British frame of mind  ... I'm not saying you guys don't feel the emotions of it, but from what I've heard, you all stay strong during times like these, and no matter what, you always press ahead. Cheers, to All!
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