sixtysecondminute
ubw rookie
Joined: May 27, 2005
Location: Solihull, UK
Posts: 186
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| Posted: Thu Jun 23, 2005 6:11 pm |
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I lie here,
All alone,
This dark night,
The street light,
Shining through my window, burns my eyes, reminds (me),
I'm still alive,
But only just...
I lie here wondering,
"What the f**k is happening?"
I feel so empty,
Yet my head it is so full of thought,
I lie here wondering,
"Why the f**k dont I just move on?"
and you're the last mistake,
I'll ever make
You lie there,
All alone,
This dark night,
Your blanket,
Suffocates your senses, reminding you,
That you should have died,
Instead of life...
I lie here wondering,
"What the f**k is happening?"
I feel so empty,
Yet my head it is so full of thought,
I lie here wondering,
"Why the f**k dont I just move on?"
and you're the last mistake,
I'll ever make
and you're the last mistake,
I'll ever make
and you're the last mistake,
I'll ever make
and you're the last mistake,
I'll ever make
and you're the last mistake,
I'll ever make
I lie here wondering,
"What the f**k is happening?"
I feel so empty,
Yet my head it is so full of thought,
I lie here wondering,
"Why the f**k cant I just move on?"
and you're the last mistake,
I'll ever make
and you're the last mistake,
I'll ever make
and you're the last mistake,
I'll ever make
and you're the last mistake,
I'll ever make
and you're the last mistake,
I'll ever make |
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minusme
Site Admin
Joined: Jan 25, 2004
Location: New York
Posts: 3647
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| Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2005 6:12 pm |
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Man, how did I miss all these lyrics... I'm working too hard!!!
What to say... This is the third set of lyrics I've read from you in a short while and they are all really good! You've certainly got some talents with a pen! Thanks for sharing! |
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sixtysecondminute
ubw rookie
Joined: May 27, 2005
Location: Solihull, UK
Posts: 186
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| Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2005 8:38 pm |
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I see you're on a commenting spree... thanks for the feedbac; and also removing the word filter on the word 'f**k'. It looked a little too wierd with,
"what the pickles is happening"
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RiCterMan
ubw luminary
Joined: Jun 10, 2005
Location: Madison, OH
Posts: 742
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| Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2005 9:48 pm |
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Wow..... Bravo Tom. That is intense. It seems you poured a great amount of emotion into this song, and that is very cool. I can relate to the part you wrote about feeling empty, and your head being full of thought. I had many times where I felt that way not too long ago. The only difference is this song seems to have a meaning that deals with another person. I like this one a lot, though.
I find some of the best songs, in many cases, deal with some heavy emotions. Great job, man! Now, to your other song... Cheers! |
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