BeccaDanae
ubw newbie
Joined: Jun 07, 2005
Location: dont have
Posts: 2
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| Posted: Thu Jun 09, 2005 12:35 pm |
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will you ever remember me
after you've left me behind
and then when you want to think things over again
cause you've relized what a fool you where
since sometimes i'm just not good enough
for the moment but deep down under the
hour things seem so much more realistic
so you decide you can't seem to survive
without that time that we had
I told you not to leave me behind but you said don't worry cause I could never do that
I can't believe I took that and ran a
nd thought it'd last cause as soon as the hour passed you'd be back to me but not this time you can have it you're way
cause I'm not chaning my mind
this time it's now or never you can have it you're way
thats perfectly fine with me don't plan on
turning back to see my standing there waving hello
cause this time the days past day's turned to night and this time it's my turn to give you the final verdict..
have it you're way you had the
chance but you took it and lost it
now I'm just sorry i trusted you with my life,
told you everything that ever mattered
so will you ever look back..
cause I hope you're happy i'll cherish theese memories
right before i burn them in flames
you can look back but don't count on me to be there,
atleast not this time..
it's your chance you've got the final verdict
before night turns into day and i'm begging you to
please let me know will night turn into day and the
summer grow cold and gray
another song
sometimes I wonder sometimes i think
would people ever notice if I was gone
and sometimes I begin to ponder
what will the answer be
because I know for sure there are people
better then me
and sometimes I just wanna go for a day
and see what happens what people finally say
and then i wonder would you even notice or care
cause you where my everything and you're gone to
you left just as fast as a cool summer breeze
you stayed for just a minute and left within seconds'
and I wish i could go back
you where my world and you didn't even know it
that quickly tumbled away
I hate how naive and unknowing you are
I hate how you don't even know i care
cause you where my world and that crashed one day
So when I cry you won't even notice the tears
that where once in my eyes
cause the light will fade from my eyes
and you won't even stop and ask is everything okay
I can't belive I took the time to care
It's not like anybody else will take the time and do the same
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cprmark
ubw newbie
Joined: Jan 24, 2005
Location: Oxford, Mississippi (USA)
Posts: 22
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| Posted: Sat Jun 11, 2005 1:17 pm |
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I had to read these lyrics a couple of times to catch the cadence, but when I did, I was moved by a story of true love, gone bitter. Any time you can make other people feel your emotion, as a writer, you've done your job. Good work Becca, Keep it up. |
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