x_rejection_x
ubw newbie
Joined: May 31, 2005
Location: Shirley Long Island in NY
Posts: 1
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| Posted: Tue May 31, 2005 11:04 pm |
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hey uh heres one of my songs which the name is kinda unknown but okay... feel free to leve comments about it n shit. so here
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your gone and I miss you
i think of you atleast once a day
thats a given, but i cant keep living w/out you
so I gess you don't care becuz ur still gone and I miss you
saw your picture last night just wasn't fair
I miss you so much why do you hate me
I don't think of you too much but enough
you have no idea how manii times im wonder
what wuld happen if you forgave me for even a second
I don't remember much about that day other then the conversation
(chorus)
I don't know why i torture myself w/ your picture
around me (around me) |
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RiCterMan
ubw luminary
Joined: Jun 10, 2005
Location: Madison, OH
Posts: 742
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| Posted: Tue Jun 14, 2005 3:21 am |
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Cool lyrics. I like how it's worded. Not too complex, but not too simple. I have a suggestion for a title, but I know that in my case, I'd only accept title suggestions from one person. My cuz', Greg. That man knows some stuff, and him and I have been pretty close for the most part, because music connects us. I'm not close-minded. It's just the songs are usually pretty personal when I write them, almost like they're a part of me. But my cousin, he's family, so in a way he's part of me too. He's at least a big part of my life. Anyway, I've written three new songs in the last three days that are very personal, but they are incredibly positive, so... It's all good. If you want to hear my suggestion for a title, reply to this response, and I'll inform you about it. Great work!
Cheers and a Smile!
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