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Cam
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Posted: Sun May 29, 2005 4:47 am Reply with quote

Let me know what you think.

Here's the song:

http://www.unsignedbandweb.com/music/bands/4362/

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Beautiful Waste Of Time

We step out into the decadent decay
To stir the languor of our love
And when we kiss, you turn your tired eyes away
Trapped in the mirror hung above
Sometimes I'm glad I've only got one life to waste
You are the needle in my arm
And though I'm dying, I have such a pretty time
You do me harm
Come on, do me harm
It's a lovely waste, such a beautiful waste
You're a wonderful waste of time
And I could lose my mind in your pointless embrace
Such a beautiful waste of time

Every night's a fight for life
The finest food, the driest wines
Don't stop the music, keep on dancing as we sink
Shot holes beneath the waterline
And I can only speak in metaphors
As I watch the horde assail the walls
Oh my darling, close your eyes and let's pretend
That we're not here at all

It's a lovely waste, such a beautiful waste
You're a wonderful waste of time
And I could lose my mind to your pointless debates
Such a beautiful waste of time

In moonlit shoes, I buried all my clocks
I meant to sieze the day
But somehow I forgot
Could be a king if I could just wake up
I wrote the book
On how to lose the plot
I love you girl, but you tie me up in knots
Keep tripping on your violins and handcuffs

You're a lovely waste, such a beautiful waste
You're a wonderful waste of time
And I could lose my mind in your pointless embrace
Such a beautiful waste of time

Maybe one fine day, I could light up the stage
Where the bells of escape still chime
But not tonight, cos I still can't tear my face away
From this beautiful waste of time

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All our lyrics are here: http://www.coloursrun.com/lyrics/index.html
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minusme
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Posted: Sun May 29, 2005 6:45 am Reply with quote

WOW! These are really good lyrics. I love your play on words and the strange symbolism. This is definately 'my' favorite style of writing and you do it very well and with MUCH originality. I gave a listen to the song and was really impressed as well!!!! AWESOME!!!! Thanks for sharing!
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Cam
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Posted: Mon May 30, 2005 11:04 am Reply with quote

Thanks very much. I've noticed that you're very helpful and positive with people when they post their lyrics, and I can't stress enough how great this is. Too many potential lyricists lose hope when their first effort isn't up to Leonard Cohen standards and their friends shoot them down. It's important to be encouraged every step of the way; too much rock nowadays dispenses with good lyrics, as if they don't justify the time spent on them. This is crazy, since the lyrics are the point of the song. Well, they are to me anyway.

If you liked those words, all the lyrics to our songs (and most of the songs themselves) can be found here:

www.ColoursRun.com lyrics page
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RiCterMan
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Posted: Mon Jun 13, 2005 8:06 am Reply with quote

I can't find my mind! It was blown away somewhere! Ok, that was half-joking, but like the last person who replied said, "WOW." That pretty much fits what most viewers would see in your lyrics. I don't know if you like the Deftones, but it reminds me of Chino's words, but far more complex. I love it. Check out my first post, and let me know what you think of my "words to a tune." I'd really like to hear your thoughts on what I wrote, because you my friend, are pretty good. Nothing more, except keep posting your lyrics! Smile

Cheers and a smile!
RiCterMan

P.S., or whatever this is called in a post: I'm basically skimming the forum looking for three songs to read, and possibly give feedback on, for today. So, if you did post more, I probably missed them. If I see any in the future though, they'll be read (not sure about feedback... wow.)
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Cam
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Posted: Sat Jun 18, 2005 3:39 am Reply with quote

Hey, thanks a lot. You write some good lyrics too. I don't really know the Deftones' stuff; my lyrics are mostly influenced by Paul Simon and Pink Floyd, with some Radiohead thrown in for good measure.
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