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MerciPourLeAmore
ubw newbie
Joined: May 19, 2005
Location: Republican shithole , Texas, U.S.
Posts: 13
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| Posted: Thu May 19, 2005 9:34 pm |
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Fallen in a ditch and ended up in hell
Pull that goddamn trigger
'cause i'm down
and kicking won't kill me
Sing a little prayer before the devil takes you
You sponge off my pain but you can't make me scream
You're trapped in a web because you've fallen for the old book
Try and repent now
I'll spit on your grave
Clean the blood off your lips
and dry your eyes from the joy
Look me straight through and tell me
You meant to cause this pain
Taking the last of what's been offered
Don't hide away to cry
Because the devil will find you
and there is no cure for the sadist |
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minusme
Site Admin
Joined: Jan 25, 2004
Location: New York
Posts: 3648
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| Posted: Fri May 20, 2005 5:18 am |
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Nice writing style. These are a little heavy for my personal taste, but the writing is good. |
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Brooksy
ubw screen dweller
Joined: Oct 08, 2004
Location: The Wastelands
Posts: 1899
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| Posted: Fri May 20, 2005 5:40 am |
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Interesting composition, this one.
Sing a little prayer before the devil takes you
You sponge off my pain but you can't make me scream
What 2 great classic lines these.  |
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