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TalkieLava
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Posted: Wed Apr 27, 2005 4:33 pm Reply with quote

Tell me what you think

I just wrote this
Its not finished
I'll be working on it.....Here

Talkie



Rocks are broken while water dances
My hearts hurts from your strong advances

I bleed not blood but tears from my eyes
This whole world's screwed and that why I cry

If could have almost anything
I wish for a happy life and a good song to sing

A tune for the road and a snack for later
some shoes for my feet and a green alligator

What is my obsession with cold blooded creatures
Why do I believe Bob Marley was Christ's teacher

My rewards are offered with something in return
Letting go of beliefs and letting problems burn

When things aren't right and you can't see
I'll be your eyes and a strong tree
If it hurts when it shouldn't remember this
If its broken it can always be fixed
Life is game that anyone can win
Use your advantages and take a spin
If theres something wrong let it go
Uses your hands to built and let your heart grow

I don't wana preach so take what you want and leave the rest
these true feelings emerge and I feel less stressed

My wisdom is expressed though poetry and words
some of my art includes crooked grinding red painted curbs

relationships with girls are hard for me
i don't understand how to date properly

Deep down i have a million things to say
But whenever I talk it comes out in the wrong way

Laying down something solid and unique
I write just for right now versus something for next week

Freestyles are fun and done clean
Its been a long time since Ive been on the scene

I used to spit and jaws would drop
No one had ever seen a buzzed teenager rhyme so hot
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Joined: Jan 25, 2004
Location: New York
Posts: 3761

Posted: Mon May 02, 2005 8:04 pm Reply with quote

I really like your sense of irony. Very well written lyrics with lots of interesting plays on words. Awesome! Thanks for sharing....
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