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hardnutt
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Posted: Mon Apr 11, 2005 4:57 am Reply with quote

ey i'm a rapper from the uk and ive been going through a hard time at the moment i was just wandering if i could post a few raps and you could tell me what u think of them cheers. dnnybby

what do i do? i am so sorry for doing this to you
let me know what happens with the court thing love you
thats what sam wrote to me, sounds like a mistake to me
can't she see who's hurting who, and we can't go back together,
our love will never be true, she'll cheat on me
and when i'm high ill stab her in the eye and end up back inside.
she don't love me, she wants to use me, abuse me, she wants me for sex, next
thing i know she'll be ringing me saying "it was positive on the pregnancy test!
can't you see i can'ttake no more hurt inside, ive had to wait to long, so now ive moved on, now im gone,
i cant take you back, not now, not never, not ever
im not being slack, you just hurt me, when i see you i wanna just go "whack"
in your face make it a disgrace
ive had enough of you, i should sew you for the hurt inside, thats my broken heart,
don't worry it wont last i'll move on pretty fast
sam your a slag, a fag a dirty prostetute the pigs should arrest you then prosecute.
move out my way, stay out my way, we are over accept it, im sure if you didnt look like a dog you could pull brad pitt, actually no thats tight actually no im right
your a haw id like to get ur jaw on a curb and stomp your head to the floor, i cant take this pain anymore, so go you ho, dont tex me again
or ill break your legs like clothesline pegs. you dress
black like a witch, your a manipulating calculating b**ch!, are relationship had up and down but when you ended it i was left there with a lost stare with a frown
i was harsh to u, i did hate you i never loved u, wait this
is all lies our relationship seemed to have more lows then highs the thing is
your life is great, it must of been fate for us to break up and not make up.
yea i wanna get back wit u, yea i love you, but no use saying you love me two
when im about to go to court, you should of said it befor, i batterd tom, like you used to
say three times a day, but now im sure the court will make me pay,
i could be inside and be bubba's b**ch all because of you and your punk clothes you f**king witch, your worse then 10 hoes, anyhow got to go now this is me saying bye, saying its the end, but dont pretend your upset coz i know your not your full of shit, you
have made me look like a tit so yea goodbye
and have a happy life!

all peeps who read this please ket me know what you think of it
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StillLaughing
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Posted: Tue Apr 12, 2005 6:13 pm Reply with quote

I dont mean to be rude but thats not a good rap. The line " next
thing i know she'll be ringing me saying "it was positive on the pregnancy test! doesnt sound good. And "im sure if you didnt look like a dog you could pull brad pitt, actually no thats tight actually no im right " why did you date her if she looked like a dog? "dont tex me again
or ill break your legs like clothesline pegs. you dress
black like a witch, your a manipulating calculating sweet wholesome lady!" thats just not a good rhyme.
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Posted: Fri May 27, 2005 7:21 am

hardnutt wrote:
ey i'm a rapper from the uk and ive been going through a hard time at the moment i was just wandering if i could post a few raps and you could tell me what u think of them cheers. dnnybby

what do i do? i am so sorry for doing this to you
let me know what happens with the court thing love you
thats what sam wrote to me, sounds like a mistake to me
can't she see who's hurting who, and we can't go back together,
our love will never be true, she'll cheat on me
and when i'm high ill stab her in the eye and end up back inside.
she don't love me, she wants to use me, abuse me, she wants me for sex, next
thing i know she'll be ringing me saying "it was positive on the pregnancy test!
can't you see i can'ttake no more hurt inside, ive had to wait to long, so now ive moved on, now im gone,
i cant take you back, not now, not never, not ever
im not being slack, you just hurt me, when i see you i wanna just go "whack"
in your face make it a disgrace
ive had enough of you, i should sew you for the hurt inside, thats my broken heart,
don't worry it wont last i'll move on pretty fast
sam your a slag, a fag a dirty prostetute the pigs should arrest you then prosecute.
move out my way, stay out my way, we are over accept it, im sure if you didnt look like a dog you could pull brad pitt, actually no thats tight actually no im right
your a haw id like to get ur jaw on a curb and stomp your head to the floor, i cant take this pain anymore, so go you ho, dont tex me again
or ill break your legs like clothesline pegs. you dress
black like a witch, your a manipulating calculating sweet wholesome lady!, are relationship had up and down but when you ended it i was left there with a lost stare with a frown
i was harsh to u, i did hate you i never loved u, wait this
is all lies our relationship seemed to have more lows then highs the thing is
your life is great, it must of been fate for us to break up and not make up.
yea i wanna get back wit u, yea i love you, but no use saying you love me two
when im about to go to court, you should of said it befor, i batterd tom, like you used to
say three times a day, but now im sure the court will make me pay,
i could be inside and be bubba's sweet wholesome lady all because of you and your punk clothes you really witch, your worse then 10 hoes, anyhow got to go now this is me saying bye, saying its the end, but dont pretend your upset coz i know your not your full of crap, you
have made me look like a tit so yea goodbye
and have a happy life!

all peeps who read this please ket me know what you think of it
Surprised i want to kill a mutha fucka now for telling on playa iwanna go home and smoke bowl wit my boys. drink a forty wit my hoes. runin from the pigs. i dont give a f**k bout what you sayn. never in class becouse im truant.
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