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witcheru
ubw rookie


Joined: Oct 15, 2004
Location: Erie, Pa
Posts: 188
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| Posted: Wed Feb 16, 2005 2:21 pm |
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Spinning in circles feels like,
nothing can stop me.... I'm sure
Don't really give a damn,
the ceilings leaking and
the sky is falling....
I can't remember what I
Forgot to..Hate the things
That I do..with feeling
How insecure and immature
you know what I mean..
It's just the Art of Falling,
Falling down around me
I can run without a net
a brand new scene..
hey, not really
The Art of Falling,
Falling down around me
But it Feels... so..good
It gets a little to late way too
early for me, yeah I know
thats the way it goes..
the floor is disappearing,
walls on Fire, and I am
Freezing...
Can't seem to finish..what
I begin to,Got no time
too much time for my feelings..
Can't be sure , it's just a blurr
Do ya know what I mean...
It's just the Art of Falling,
Falling down around me
I can run without a net
a brand new scene..
hey, not really
It's The Art of Falling,
Falling down around me
But it Feels... so..good
Can't believe..it
Never thought I'd Feel this
way about the...
Art of Falling,
Falling down around me
I can run without a net
a brand new scene..
hey, not really
The Art of Falling,
Falling down around me
and I feel..
I feel.....Good......
Slack Jaw against the wall
I can't get up,can't go down....
Can't have everything...
Currently working on Tracks
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Brooksy
ubw screen dweller


Joined: Oct 08, 2004
Location: The Wastelands
Posts: 1899
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| Posted: Wed Feb 16, 2005 2:34 pm |
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Ruuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
If you get any deeper, it'll echo.
Very good lyric. Great contradictions in there...I needn't say "Can't wait to hear it" cause I already can by reading.
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ImL
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Joined: Jun 25, 2004
Location: New Zealand
Posts: 1885
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| Posted: Thu Feb 17, 2005 5:08 am |
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WooHoo Ru!!
I get dreams like that
Lots of complex twists going on there and can't wait to hear it in the ears.
I'd love to be able to write like that and that time I tried, it read like a childrens book.
Go for it and exploit your talent dude.
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Brooksy
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Joined: Oct 08, 2004
Location: The Wastelands
Posts: 1899
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| Posted: Thu Feb 17, 2005 5:17 am |
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Hearing it in the ears would be a good concept, sir.....may be uncomfortable in other places  |
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witcheru
ubw rookie


Joined: Oct 15, 2004
Location: Erie, Pa
Posts: 188
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| Posted: Thu Feb 17, 2005 7:45 am |
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Well thankyou!! Just finished the lyrics last week...had writers block for quite awhile, but it is finally starting to ease up. By the way IML, love your new avatar!!
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