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smili
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| Posted: Fri Dec 03, 2004 12:19 am |
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Brooksy
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| Posted: Fri Dec 03, 2004 6:23 am |
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Top track.
As usual, a lot to learn from you. Really enjoyed the lyric, and the beat was great.
I'll be singing "na-na-n-na" all day now.  |
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Soulfish
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| Posted: Fri Dec 03, 2004 6:30 am |
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| Brooksy wrote: | Top track.
I'll be singing "na-na-n-na" all day now. |
Second that - nice groove - Like the bass sound and the riff coming after the vocal in verse. Can almost hear layering an acoustic on the rhythm guitar- maybe even keys (organ stylie!). (listening on lo-fi so if it already is blame my crappy mac built in speakers!) Like the outro - nice movement between harmonies and vocal. Keep up the good work bro.  |
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unproject
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| Posted: Fri Dec 03, 2004 7:16 am |
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yes, very well accomplished (?) tune! i totally dig it, good stuff. keep up good work
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minusme
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| Posted: Fri Dec 03, 2004 7:42 am |
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I like the guitar sound, and the mix is very good as usual. The song has a really nice flow and rhythm.
Another great addition from smili!!!!!!
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smili
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| Posted: Fri Dec 03, 2004 10:40 am |
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Thanks to everybody for listening and the feedback.
| Soulfish wrote: | | Can almost hear layering an acoustic on the rhythm guitar- maybe even keys (organ stylie!). (listening on lo-fi so if it already is blame my crappy mac built in speakers!) |
You know, it's been so long since I recorded it I had to play it back to see if an acoustic is in there or not. I know I wrote the chorus part on an acoustic, but after listening I don't think there's one in there. If it's there it's mixed very low.
I'm sorry you have to listen in lofi... I just played back the lofi version ...    I feel you pain.  Lots of phasey artifacts in there.
In fact - that would be a great commercial for broadband wouldn't it? Just play 5 seconds of the same tune a lofi vs. hifi - then say "call us now to get your cable internet and hear what you're missing!"
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