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DjEmpty
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Location: Dallas, Tx
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| Posted: Fri Nov 12, 2004 4:01 pm |
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New tune up boys and girls called Masks We Wear check it out and dance.... |
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DjEmpty
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| Posted: Thu Nov 18, 2004 7:30 pm |
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New song up called Im Your Dj check it out thanks. |
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unproject
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| Posted: Thu Nov 18, 2004 8:18 pm |
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k, lemme give it a spin
oo intro sounds like techno indeed. first synth needs more bass i think, and maybe more distortion. diggin the flanged snares. but hats are too trancy for techno, try 808-like hats for this one. around 2:50 it becomes a bit trancy but not bad, diggin it, badass noise on the background!
3:15, synths sound a bit cheesy, i would use flanger on the low end here. still a little trancy. reverse vox work fine. kicks are different in these part? if yes, intro kicks were better. lol creative outro..
so overall, needs more work on some stuff, but good job anyway! keep up the good work!
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unproject
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| Posted: Thu Nov 18, 2004 8:27 pm |
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well i am bored so, "masks we wear":
umm intro reminds a bit one of your older tunes? kicks may be louder, i am on headphones though, dunno. nice percish synth, enjoying it. on 1:35 again a bit cheesy, dunno harmony is good but synths need more job for sure. where's the snare?
hmm bass is a tad loud and dry, i would cut it more with a lp filter. after 4:15, it definitely needs snares. i don't dig the outro.
overall, this should be a good anthem trance if synths were less cheesy, and there were more rhythmic elements such as percs and snares and stuff. good potential though, just work on this one more and you'll have a killer trance song.
peace. |
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alek_acero
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Joined: Apr 23, 2004
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| Posted: Thu Nov 18, 2004 9:22 pm |
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| unproject wrote: | well i am bored so, "masks we wear":
umm intro reminds a bit one of your older tunes? kicks may be louder, i am on headphones though, dunno. nice percish synth, enjoying it. on 1:35 again a bit cheesy, dunno harmony is good but synths need more job for sure. where's the snare?
hmm bass is a tad loud and dry, i would cut it more with a lp filter. after 4:15, it definitely needs snares. i don't dig the outro.
overall, this should be a good anthem trance if synths were less cheesy, and there were more rhythmic elements such as percs and snares and stuff. good potential though, just work on this one more and you'll have a killer trance song.
peace. |
are you missing your reviews? lol.......
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ImL
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| Posted: Fri Nov 19, 2004 3:51 am |
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alekelakekela wrote:
I love the new name  
Can't say it, but love it 
And if you look at it in the mirror like I've just done, it looks beautiful  |
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alek_acero
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| Posted: Fri Nov 19, 2004 8:18 am |
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Oh! Thanks a lot Iml ! I want to thanks all the people that invented letters, especially the A, L, E and K which are my favorites.....Thankx again ImlmImlmImlmI !
Alek aka creole |
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ImL
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| Posted: Sat Nov 20, 2004 7:58 am |
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You're most welcome  |
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