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smili
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Location: Nashville TN
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| Posted: Mon Oct 18, 2004 7:44 pm |
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Hello all, I've posted a couple of Rock tunes and if you're inclined would appreciate comments.
"I might Bend" and "Rise Above".
http://www.unsignedbandweb.com/music/bands/1424/
In particular I'm curious if "I Might Bend" works? I liked how it turned out, but it's sortof experimental from a songwriting standpoint.
EDIT - I meant to say "Rise Above" was the experimental one...fingers on autopilot  apologies
Anyhow, appreciate comments on either tune - what works / doesn't work for you? Negative as well as positive comments appreciated. Hope you enjoy.
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minusme
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| Posted: Mon Oct 18, 2004 8:11 pm |
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Smili...
I just listened to both of your new tracks and let me just say...... WOW!!!!
Incredible writing on both accounts!!
My favorite was 'I might bend'. I really like the acoustic intro and you did a great job with the transition to the heavier rock part of the song. EXCELLENT job mixing this and keeping the segways impactful! I really like the driving guitar riff as well. VERY COOL!
This kind of pushes at the genre a little, which I like. The vocals have a nice effect, and the harmonies are great, but could be a little louder in my opinion.
 HIGHLY RECOMMENDED!!!!!! Everyone should go check these out!!!!
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unproject
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| Posted: Tue Oct 19, 2004 8:05 am |
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yes, two great tracks, diggin both for sure. if you need a more detailed review please feel free to post into my review thread.
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smili
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| Posted: Tue Oct 19, 2004 6:49 pm |
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thanks to both of you for the comments...
unproject, I posted into your review thread concerning "Rise Above". thanks for offering. I noticed in my initial post I mistakenly said "I might bend" is more experimental - my mistake . I meant to say "Rise Above" was more experimental ... look forward to your review on that thread.
http://www.unsignedbandweb.com/modules.php?name=Forums&file=viewtopic&t=835
thanks in advance for taking the time. much appreciated.
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kellyfkiernan
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| Posted: Tue Oct 19, 2004 7:48 pm |
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inspiring tracks...really like your stuff..really like your stuff |
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smili
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| Posted: Tue Oct 19, 2004 10:08 pm |
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Big thanks for your comments Kelly. (I was going to PM you to say thanks for listening but I see you're on a guest i.d.) I encourage you to register for the forums and visit in while you're listening to the songs on the site.
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melody
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| Posted: Wed Oct 20, 2004 4:55 pm |
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good stuff!! "On The Mountain" has a "Tragically Hip" feeling to it, and us Canadians love our Tragically Hip! As for "Rise Above" i noticed a little influece in the music of "U2" maybe? it's all amazing work!
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