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Maisie
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Joined: Oct 05, 2004
Location: Allen, TX
Posts: 147
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| Posted: Fri Oct 15, 2004 12:15 pm |
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I have always thought of my mind and my thoughts as a temple. Oftentimes, I've made a reference to Rome in my songs, which has always been used metaphorically. "Rome Is Lost" is a song about losing one's mind.
Please listen to "Rome Is Lost" and let me know what you think. It's one of my older songs from my first album, F-Note.
Thanks,
Jack Maisie, Jr. |
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Brooksy
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Joined: Oct 08, 2004
Location: The Wastelands
Posts: 1899
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| Posted: Sat Oct 16, 2004 9:50 am |
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Very deep thinking lyrically.
The only nit I had was with the slight hiss in the background, but like y' said it's one of y' older songs.
As usual, love your work, bud. |
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minusme
Site Admin
Joined: Jan 25, 2004
Location: New York
Posts: 3647
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| Posted: Sat Oct 16, 2004 5:29 pm |
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Nice arpeggio at the beginning,, creates a really nice atmosphere...
Your vocal structure is also cool, and fits well over the melody of the song.
Enjoyed it!!!
Ron |
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