"Down by the Seaside" original rock song

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boardsoffloyd85
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Posted: Tue May 23, 2017 11:37 pm Reply with quote

Hello. I just thought I would share this thing I wrote. I play the guitar and bass, do the vocals, use a drum machine and mix it all together.

https://soundcloud.com/paul-viviani/down-by-the-seaside-1

Any feedback would be much appreciated
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Posted: Thu Jun 22, 2017 11:43 pm Reply with quote

Hey!

Good work..You did the lyrics? Brilliant.

Thank you.
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Posted: Fri Oct 20, 2017 2:42 pm Reply with quote

Hi there

Firstly I love the guitar(s), beatbox thing going on. What I thought was initially minimal is infact very cleverly crafted. I love the distant vocal and upfront guitars in the mix and dreamy backing vocals a bonus. It's more indie rock than rock in my humble and may be a tad long but hey what do I know... it works – whatever you're doing, it's good, keep doing it.

Terry
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