Rock Originals, need constructive criticism!

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torrentband94
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Posted: Sun Dec 09, 2012 1:11 pm Reply with quote

Hey guys,
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q7ucQfPJeO0
This is our band, Torrent. We are all 18 or 19 and we've recorded an EP CD. Can you guys check out this track and give us some constructive criticism to help us get better?
Thanks!
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maxEMrock
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Posted: Sun Jan 20, 2013 9:04 pm Reply with quote

Goodbye

I really enjoyed the intro. The hook is really good. I think the vocals are a bit too up front, it doesn't blend as well as it could. The vocals can be a bit more agressive, it would add to the kick ass guitar riffs. I think the solo is a bit too technical for a grungy song like this, it just doesn't come naturally. But the bridge part after the solo is amazing.

I would give a 8/10 with a potential 8.5

Come around

The vocals on this one are way better than for Goodbye. It has the right feel for the right song. The songwriting stands out. I thought it was a bit boring until 3:20. That part really saves the song from being just another modern rock ballad. That twist came naturally to me unlike the Goodbye solo.

This song has reached its full potential at 8/10
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