'"Summer Falls" review please

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StillLaughing
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Posted: Wed Apr 06, 2005 4:20 pm Reply with quote

This is one of the first songs i ever wrote it's played on a acoustic guitar. i dont know if its good or not you be the judge. It's called summer falls.



This is our last summer we're watching
the stars as tears fall down my face.
I'll miss you alot i dont wanna loose you so
please be safe. I'll stumble upon you another day.


chorus: So long to this summer you were there for me
now its time for us to go our seprate ways.

I'll never forget your face. Your smile is sweet it
could be in my head for days. I can talk to you for hours
you make my world a better place. I hope i did the same. We
would sit on my roof and look at the clouds they were all different
shapes. I'll be on mine tonight looking for you mabye i'll see you, we'll
find a way so connect agian.

chorus: So long to this summer you were there for me
now its time for us to go our seprate ways. I fell in love this summer
i hope you did to. So long to this summer.
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Soulfish
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Posted: Thu Apr 07, 2005 6:05 am Reply with quote

I like the realness of it. What kind of music is it in?
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StillLaughing
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Posted: Thu Apr 07, 2005 9:12 am Reply with quote

Thanks! Very Happy It's acoustic/ emo music.
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