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LyingMouth
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Joined: May 24, 2005
Location: Southampton, UK
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| Posted: Fri May 27, 2005 10:19 am |
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Brooksy
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Joined: Oct 08, 2004
Location: The Wastelands
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| Posted: Fri May 27, 2005 11:03 am |
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Welcome to Unsigned Band Web, dude...share the same first name too 
Ok took a couple of listens, but after I got over the vocal stuff I was kinda hooked. Darn impressive. The instrumentals had me bouncin' all over the room |
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LyingMouth
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Joined: May 24, 2005
Location: Southampton, UK
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| Posted: Sat May 28, 2005 2:57 am |
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Hey, thanks. I've had nothing but positive comments so far. My next song is up btw if you want to check it out. Its recorded clean on the electric guitar. In a few weeks I will record it with my restrung acoustic guitar. |
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Brooksy
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| Posted: Sat May 28, 2005 4:10 am |
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Love the guitar on She Used To Speak....lonely....cool. Very chilled, compare to the adrenalin of the last track.
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Robb_Handshake
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Joined: May 20, 2005
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| Posted: Sat May 28, 2005 5:38 am |
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Dude, not wishing to sound patronising, but for a fourteen year old year old your songs are well good! I really like the riff in the first one, although vocoders are dangerous things - use them wisely! The second one really lifted off in the middle as well when that high part came in, it was lovely.
Cheers
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Soulfish
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Joined: Nov 07, 2004
Location: Brighton
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| Posted: Sat May 28, 2005 7:09 am |
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Checked you out on purevolume the other day - you got talent. Too much effect on the vocal though - or too little dependeing on your intention. Tight, well structured, got groove, it's all there. Just the vocal annoys me. But hey - it's just my opinion. Check us out on pure volume
www.purevolume.com/ghotti
you might like one of our tracks - This is better than knightrider. |
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LyingMouth
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Joined: May 24, 2005
Location: Southampton, UK
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| Posted: Sat May 28, 2005 7:41 am |
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Im actually going to release another version of it without the vocals. I agree they're poor. Im not a very good singer you see, or my voice hasn't broken enough to get the lower note so i just recorded myself quietly and buggered it up with some effects. Im trying to think of what will replace them, otherwise its an even more repetative song than it is already. |
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Soulfish
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| Posted: Sat May 28, 2005 10:54 am |
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| LyingMouth wrote: | | Im actually going to release another version of it without the vocals. I agree they're poor. Im not a very good singer you see, or my voice hasn't broken enough to get the lower note so i just recorded myself quietly and buggered it up with some effects. Im trying to think of what will replace them, otherwise its an even more repetative song than it is already. |
Try putting it through a distortion pedal or a tremolo. Digital delay pedals fatten vocals up too. Otherwise just work out some unique harmonies or track up the vocal - hell, it worked for Alice in Chains and Nirvarna! |
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