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BellaCanzone
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Joined: Feb 15, 2008
Posts: 6
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| Posted: Fri Feb 15, 2008 3:35 pm |
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hey guys me again...second song today probably just as bad lol again no name...but i've only just started writing please comment and give good advice on how to improve ;-) thanks
Verse:
Your trying...
Your lying...
Your crying...
Your failing...
(Pause)
Your loosing this unseen battle!!
Is this what you want?
how you want it to end?
Do you want me just to disappear from your life?
I can’t go on like this!
Your leaving me to search for unknown answers...
Chorus:
I see your picture in my mind
And I can’t move on...
So many reasons I’ve got to find
I know I’ll just make the same mistake
But I can’t rid these feelings...
Verse:
I’ve got so many things to say
I’m still waiting for my dreams to come true
No way. Not this way!
I know it’s hard for you... (but please)
Stop hiding your feelings
They keep me breathing...
Keep me fighting...
Keep me close to you!!...
Chorus:
I see your picture in my mind
And I can’t move on...
So many reasons I’ve got to find
I know I’ll just make the same mistake
But I can’t rid these feelings...
Verse:
Alright...we’ve taken time
But I can’t give up
You’ve tried to move on, when we’re together..
There’s always someone else. Not this time!
You keep coming back...telling me I’m the one.
How am I supposed to know what you want?
If you don’t tell me....
I don’t wanna be alone...i don’t wanna be free
Chorus:
I see your picture in my mind
And I can’t move on...
So many reasons I’ve got to find
I know I’ll just make the same mistake
But I can’t rid these feelings...
Interlude
Ending:
I’m not letting go
No.no!! I’m not letting go.
I can’t.
I wont .
I’m not letting go!
I’m not letting go!
I’m not letting go!
I’m not letting go!
I’m not letting go!.... |
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elsiv
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Joined: Feb 24, 2008
Posts: 9
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| Posted: Sun Feb 24, 2008 1:25 pm |
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woooow..cool..have you written it yourself? I really liked its lyrics..just wondering how would be its music..!when are you releasing it man..? |
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BellaCanzone
ubw newbie
Joined: Feb 15, 2008
Posts: 6
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| Posted: Sun Feb 24, 2008 1:32 pm |
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thanks...yea i wrote them myself..i'm really glad you liked them ;-) havent really thought about the music yet but i play guitar so maybe i will think of something to go with the lyrics |
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