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fhub
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| Posted: Tue Jan 29, 2008 3:25 pm |
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gunner
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Joined: Jan 30, 2004
Location: Planet Earth
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| Posted: Tue Jan 29, 2008 6:19 pm |
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Good Job on the song.....but may i make a suggestion???
maybe break up some of the strumming patterns on the guitar........
your friend has a very nice voice and you play the acoustic well....
but like i said...i think if you strum half as fast in the middle of the song...or threw in some arppegios this would be an even better song.. |
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fhub
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| Posted: Tue Jan 29, 2008 7:11 pm |
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thanks a lot thats good advice. i thought it could use some variety too |
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Seneki
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Joined: Oct 21, 2004
Location: Sydney, Australia
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| Posted: Tue Jan 29, 2008 10:41 pm |
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Plenty of other songs yet to write though eh?
Keep up the good work dude. |
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fhub
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| Posted: Wed Jan 30, 2008 8:26 am |
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haha yeah we probably have around 4 originals at the moment
we recorded a few covers. my friend is making a myspace so we can put some songs up.
our name is "only silhouettes" |
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