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Bullet41
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Joined: May 22, 2005
Location: Bracknell
Posts: 120
Posted: Thu Dec 20, 2007 8:34 pm Reply with quote
i really wish christmas would die
maybe we might learn to accept it.
With its twilight corpse stained and rusted
i will give this to you
in the twelve seasons of logic -
because who is Jebus anyway?
The king of kings or another fool who lost his slipper.
But don't worry girl
i know what will make things better:
i will take care of our children as soon as the weather
learns how to breast feed...
The fat boy will fade in a sterile chariot
filled with nothing but turkish prostitutes
i don't recall his name
but i know he's an addict.
But it's not to up me if christmas should be cut off oxygen
i'm nothing but an unwell man
and my house wouldn't stop singing
the carols of illness and insincerity.
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FaceFitz
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Joined: Sep 21, 2007
Location: Nottingham, UK
Posts: 535
Posted: Fri Dec 21, 2007 3:37 am Reply with quote
dont listen to him Jebus, ill buy you an extra special birthday gift to retrieve this sinners soul!!! Laughing Laughing

scanned through a couple of you posts mate... (was a bit too much of a bombardment to read them all) you put some nice twist in your poetry, also some pure insane rantings...lol... i do find some of it slightly self indulgent when you delve into madness, there is not alot i can connect with in places, its almost like a mish - mash of words... but in other places there is nice 'vivid' imageryand clever takes on life...

oh my god i just made a compliment sandwich didnt i???...lol... damn...


good luck with your poetry for the future mate... Cool
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