Take It To The Grave -Let me know, Thanks

ubw newbie Joined: May 31, 2007 Posts: 19

A work still on the board. Let me know where it’s at in you mind. Thanks

Take It To The Grave
@ Lyneva Starbuck 10-21-07
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=664080

Your eyes tell a story
Your lips may never say
You can only hide the truth so long
It’ll come back for you one day

You’re looking on the outside
As another page is turned
Still you search for the next best thing
With all the paths you burn

So you can take it to the grave
All the things you can never say
Were no one could ever hear
All your thoughts now coming true
With so much you want to do
The time has past away, so now, your can take it to the grave

You’ll hear the words I’ll say
And go on with no blame
You’ll live your lies, and die with truth
Without feeling any shame

You’re looking on the outside
As another page is turned
Still you search for the next best thing
With all the paths you burn

So you can take it to the grave
All the things you can never say
Were no one could ever hear
All your thoughts now coming true
With so much you want to do
The time has past away, so now, your can take it to the grave

Thanks for the read. Give a listen
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=664080

moderator Joined: Jun 30, 2007 Posts: 399

i had a listen , a good effort, voice volume is a bit too high, you singed it with passion, i can listen like if u were chanting this to the maximum emo level possible, the voice inflexions stay in my mind minutes after i listened it, so i have to say it's well done.
cheers Smile

Posted: Mon Dec 03, 2007 8:00 pm

Yes i agree with PPB..the vocal track is a little overpowering at times.....
but......well, I am a bit confused......it sounds like a southern rock singer trying to sing a dark rock song...sorry man, but thats what im getting......also the lead guitar goes off note a few times during the solo...really noticible..at least to me..but other than that....its a well put together song...i like the structure you have goin on there and the lyrics are pretty good also......
are you doing all this on the PC???
the reason i ask...is...there is alot of plug-ins out there for vocal enhancement and pitch correction that you can also use for guitar tracks....if you dont do it all on pc.....well.....I would say....after recording...pick it apart...one good piece of advice i was given once was to record the song....mix as best as you can...then store it away for about a week or so and then come back to it and pick it apart.....
I should practice what i preach i guess, but i dont have that kinda time laying around...lol...time is ticking away here!!...lol
Keep it up....it really is a cool song.

ubw newbie Joined: May 31, 2007 Posts: 19

We appreciate the listening and replies so far. First we've heard on the overpowering of the vocals. Really just trying to get the song out with what we had to work with. No PC in the works except for converting. Going in that direction though. Thanks again.

Posted: Mon Dec 10, 2007 7:11 pm

Well in that case...if you were just getting the song out there with whatever you had...then i would say its a damn fine song......would like to hear this one with all the bells and whistles of mixing and mastering
GG

ubw newbie Joined: Dec 18, 2007 Posts: 5

very good effort

ubw newbie Joined: May 31, 2007 Posts: 19

Thanks. Key operative word I guess is effort.

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