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luciano
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Joined: Oct 02, 2007
Location: texas
Posts: 14
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| Posted: Fri Oct 05, 2007 7:02 pm |
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gorgatron
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Joined: Aug 08, 2006
Location: Greater Kansas City
Posts: 630
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| Posted: Fri Oct 05, 2007 8:54 pm |
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in your song Just Hate Me you say you "don't care what you (we) think" and "don't need your (our) advice" so there's no need to comment, i guess.  just kidding, man. i'm not much on metal, but you guys are definitely tight as a band, which i can respect immensely. i think the vocals came out nice, too. often bands that have rough vocals do a crap job at mixing them into the music. yours were well blended. all together the track has a good sound to it. good luck! |
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FaceFitz
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Joined: Sep 21, 2007
Location: Nottingham, UK
Posts: 530
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| Posted: Fri Oct 05, 2007 10:38 pm |
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Checked out 'TOWARDS THE GROUND' , sounds a good track overall, personally id like to hear you come out of the "don't be afraid" bridge bit straight into the "Search deep inside" chorus bit and stick your solo on the end of that, maybe building to a more powerful finish?? of course that way your left with a verse hanging in the air but there would be no shame in using said verse and another chorus and extending the song to 5mins plus... i think if it was restructured slighty it would still hold a good level of power throughout...
as i say anyway, good tune guys... keep it up... 
Wish you would stop shooting me though....lol... i feel like im getting epilepsy here...lol... just kiddin' |
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luciano
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Joined: Oct 02, 2007
Location: texas
Posts: 14
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| Posted: Fri Oct 05, 2007 11:16 pm |
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hey thanks guys for the feedback,very good points. |
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infusician
ubw newbie
Joined: Nov 08, 2007
Location: US
Posts: 11
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| Posted: Fri Nov 09, 2007 5:33 pm |
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I didn't know what to expect but...you guys are pretty good. Defnitely have a nice tight sound. I think you could play around with the sound dynamics on "Fear Within" so that you make the listener crave your message more. Just some thoughts...
You can try posting your music on my site - www.infusician.com. It's a site for music mashing, online jamming, and soundtrack creation. And a great avenue to promote your sound to other musicians and music fans.
Best of luck!  |
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