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PatientDreams
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| Posted: Fri Aug 03, 2007 11:20 am |
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Truth In The Lies
 www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=5616673&q=hi
@ 5/29/07 Lyneva Starbuck
Written by Lyneva Starbuck
Music by Frank Marinko
You’re sick, of all my lies
You say, there’s no compromise
My words, don’t mean a thing
And you’re waking up from a bad dream
Tell me, what I want to hear
Show me, I have nothing to fear
Give me, some kind of sign
And I’ll give you everything that’s mine
When the words are only words weathered in time
And the comfort that we feel is deep inside
How can you say you love me more than more than life
Wheres the truth in all the lies
How can we go on pretending its gonna be alright
That’ll be the truth in all our lies
How can your love for me be more than this
Wheres the truth in all the lies
Can we go on pretending its gonna be alright
Tell me, what you want from me
Show me, if you want me to see
Give me, the dreams of your youth
And let me become your living proof
You’re sick, of all my lies
You say, there’s no compromise
My words, don’t mean a thing
And you’re waking up from a bad dream
When the words are only words weathered in time
And the comfort that we feel is deep inside
How can you say you love me more than more than life
Wheres the truth in all the lies
How can we go on pretending its gonna be alright
That’ll be the truth in all our lies
How can you love for me be more than this
Wheres the truth in all the lies
Can we go on pretending its gonna be alright
Truth In The Lies
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ellastardj
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| Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2007 11:42 am |
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Would like to hear this but work has banned soundclick.
Any other ways I can get a listen ?
ella_star_dj
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PatientDreams
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| Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2007 1:59 pm |
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Cnyl
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| Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 10:00 am |
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Hey ya.
That song is not really my cup of tea but I like the sound of the kick drum. What kind of drum machine is that?
Keep up the good work.
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PatientDreams
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| Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 6:14 pm |
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Cynl -getting the drummer to sit in and give some time the musical production is a little rough right now so it was done with a Zoom 323. I pretty much play the drum (program) the beats myself but the machine puts them in beat. Thanks for the listen. This is just the beginning of this song. |
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clyhh
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| Posted: Fri Sep 07, 2007 10:38 pm |
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Hi Patient Dreams,
I really like the sound you've got there, I love the use of reverb on the track makes it have a nice ambient feel, quite like the chorus of the song as well.
The only thing I would be a bit unsure about are the vocals, but as you said this is only a first draft.... I look forward to hearing the finished product.
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PPB
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| Posted: Tue Sep 11, 2007 12:20 pm |
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i don't have time to comment a lot but mid freqz are too dry and its volume is too high, inspired song however
give you 61% if 100% were like if i need to buy your music  |
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PatientDreams
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| Posted: Thu Sep 13, 2007 3:39 pm |
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Thanks for the reviews so far. PPB curious of the mid freq. being dry. |
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PPB
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| Posted: Thu Sep 13, 2007 4:26 pm |
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mp3 is killing the mid :-( |
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PatientDreams
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| Posted: Thu Dec 27, 2007 8:17 pm |
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But how else do you get it out? |
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fredjohnson33
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| Posted: Thu Feb 28, 2008 8:41 pm |
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Pretty song  |
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