Need some feedback

Posted: Fri Jun 29, 2007 7:48 pm

Hey everyone...its been a long time since i have put any music up......
I have 2 works in progress i would like some feedback on..if ya got a minute....
I would appreciate both good and bad feedback...
Thanks in advance
LG

Go Here -------> http://www.unsignedbandweb.com/music/gunner

moderator Joined: Jun 30, 2007 Posts: 416

work in progress...compo is more interesting than production for that song because the guitar play is good but i doubt more of the settings u have made to it, i sound to harsh especially in the beginning...the feedback fx is set to high, but the guitar solo is good and that's what i had the most liked in your song.
cheers ! Smile

Posted: Sun Jul 01, 2007 10:38 am

I realy like the groove of the first one. Never did like the wha thing you guitar players seem to love but, you did it well. Cool

Sounds like a compleet tune and just needs vox and mixin'.
The second one is cool too. Just needs finishing. I'm not gonna' coment on whats too loud or overbarring cause you haven't done the mixing/editing yet. But what you got sounds like it will be worth your time to devlope further!

Posted: Sun Jul 01, 2007 9:06 pm

Thanks for the feedback...as i said....a work in progress...but, feedback is always good along the journey of writing a tune...lol
G

Posted: Sun Jul 01, 2007 9:27 pm

very well recorded- sounds professional for sure. i like the keyboard/ guitar groove of the first one-- neither overplays but fits well. and surprisingly not nearly as repitious as you made it out to be. keep up the good work.

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Posted: Mon Jul 02, 2007 8:08 am

Thanks, the recording was all done on the PC......
using a Line 6 Guitar Port for the guitar track.....and I used the headphone jack on my casio keyboard for the keys,,,,with a litttle manipulation after the track was recorded,,,i think it still needs some mixin'.....Thanks everyone!!
G

moderator Joined: Jun 30, 2007 Posts: 416

a simple volume and fx curves to your guitar track will make the song 2 times better for a "pro" requirement, but some weird style can please too Smile

ubw active poster Joined: Sep 13, 2004 Posts: 270

hey G..nice trkx bro...the gutiar man himself..cant wait to hear the fnsihed trax.

Posted: Mon Jul 09, 2007 11:37 pm

The start reminded me of one of Beck's tunes - vibe has some of that going on including how it kindof chills out in spots. Are you rocking your foot on a wah to get that sound?

The second tune has a bit of Dokken going on. Very heavy processing - in my view maybe a tad too much, but if you like go with.

Overall I liked the fun feel of the first one best. thanks for sharing, smili

Posted: Mon Jul 09, 2007 11:45 pm

The first track is cool
The second track is even better
Keep up the good work Gunner

Posted: Tue Jul 10, 2007 7:17 pm

Thanks guys....

Smili....I actually forgot to master the second tune...will have to re-upload that one...lol..ooppssss
Yes rockin the old Jim Dunlop Cry Baby for the wah sound.....i love that pedal... Smile

Posted: Thu Jul 26, 2007 11:54 am

Good feel should make a good /great track. Nice pace & tempo
Possbly a little dated / retro but get a hammond in there and who knows.

Ouija at www.v7music.com

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