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Aubrii
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Joined: Aug 21, 2005
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| Posted: Sun Jun 24, 2007 11:17 am |
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Time Flys when you're not watching
grab time by the hand love
and walk slowly
get death off your mind love
this is only
the beginging of
your intentions
watch the clock love
and intently
don't look away love
this is only
the start of
your inventions
If you don't watch love
you'll regret it
hold your heart love
and don't let it
lead you to think
that it's younger than you seem
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I recently gradated from high school and i can' help but think, 'where did the ime go?' I feel so old. I wrote this poem based on that. Let me know what you think. Thanks
-Aubrii |
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susiewong
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Joined: Oct 19, 2007
Location: North East England
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| Posted: Mon Oct 22, 2007 10:42 am |
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Hi,
it seems to contradict itself in a way..but I like that....
part seems to say don't worry about time, just get on with your life,
then the last seems to say be careful or time will slip away
and the bit about being conned into feeling younger than you are
ok...my thoughts.......
I'm now a touch older than you, and yeh I agree with not getting too hung up on time and age etc...........but do have moments of panic that time is going too fast too
but for what it's worth I love sometimes feeling younger than I am..........love to embrace my inner child as often as I feel the urge to
feel older than my years often so the chance to shrug that off sometimes is great
anyway I can see where you are coming from with it and at the stage you are at in your life it is reflective and makes sense
keep writing those feelings down
take care
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susiewong
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Location: North East England
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| Posted: Mon Oct 22, 2007 10:43 am |
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Aubrii
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Joined: Aug 21, 2005
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| Posted: Fri Nov 02, 2007 9:52 am |
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actually it's all saying don't let time slip away.
The last bit
"If you don't watch love
you'll regret it
hold your heart love
and don't let it
lead you to think
that it's younger than you seem "
that just means that you may not have as much time as you think you have so don't take it for granted. take advantage of the time you have. no matter how old you are, you're never too young to die. |
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commentbear
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Joined: Nov 30, 2007
Location: Santa Cruz
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| Posted: Fri Nov 30, 2007 2:21 am |
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sounds nice |
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