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BEBE
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Joined: Nov 19, 2004
Posts: 46
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| Posted: Fri Jun 22, 2007 9:22 am |
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Every time I see you
My head spins
And my emotions
Start running wild
Every time I see you
My hands are shaking
And I start aching
Deep inside
If this is love
What can I do about it
If this is love
I want to scream and shout it
I'm in love with you
My irresistable you
Every time you're near me
You pull on my heartstrings
I hear those violins
Every time you're near me
I'm so high can't deny
I'm at my happiest
If this is love
What can I do about it
If this is love
I want to scream and shout it
I'm in love with you
My irresistable you |
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Aubrii
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Joined: Aug 21, 2005
Posts: 151
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| Posted: Sun Jun 24, 2007 11:20 am |
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aw i like this poem, it's very sweet. It sems like it could easily be transitioned into a song too. Good work. My only suggestion is that you read through your posts and correct typing errors before posting. "What can I di abiut it " but other than that, great job, i hope to see more from you 
-Aubrii |
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BEBE
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Joined: Nov 19, 2004
Posts: 46
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| Posted: Sun Jun 24, 2007 2:06 pm |
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Aubrii
Thanks for your kind words and the good advice about reading through my posts to check for spelling. I didn't realise! |
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mnawlins99
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Joined: Dec 01, 2007
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| Posted: Thu Dec 06, 2007 3:08 pm |
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very nice, classic sound... |
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s0m3guy
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Joined: Dec 14, 2007
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| Posted: Fri Dec 14, 2007 4:57 am |
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I really like those lyrics, enough to make them into a little tune... ( the letters are the chords)
c b
If this is love
g
What can I do about it
d
love (when singing, go down to d on the same word)
d
I want to scream and shout it
Eminor
I'm in love with you x2
c
My irresistable you |
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BEBE
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| Posted: Wed Apr 09, 2008 10:57 am |
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yajb35
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| Posted: Wed Jun 25, 2008 9:28 pm |
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BEBE
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Joined: Nov 19, 2004
Posts: 46
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| Posted: Thu Jun 26, 2008 11:04 am |
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Hi there I loved what you did with the song. Thanks for bringing my lyrics alive.
There is a girl band over here in England who are just bringing a song out with the same title.
Love BEBE |
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lacyloves
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| Posted: Wed Jul 02, 2008 4:11 pm |
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BEBE
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| Posted: Thu Jul 03, 2008 9:24 am |
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