llc
ubw newbie
Joined: May 14, 2007
Location: Lee's Summit, Missouri
Posts: 16
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| Posted: Thu May 31, 2007 2:55 am |
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I definitely loved the first 2 minutes or so, but the piano parts had me wishing they were done in a darker instrument. Possibly a dark air instrument, or a darker synth sound. I like the parts played quite a bit, but the first piano part that comes in doesn't fit too well in my opinion.
However, I do like the supportive piano part that comes in after the first one. The chords used feel pretty good, and the piano works for the feel of it.
Overall, awesome song. Love the bass part, the drum part, and your use of crescendos.
You might add another sort of rhythm line (synth line, not a drum line) in there to add another layer to it, though it doesn't really need it. I'd be interested in seeing what you could do with this song and other pieces.
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