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monkeygaard
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Joined: May 08, 2007
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| Posted: Tue May 08, 2007 8:52 pm |
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Can anyone write lyrics for a song I want to make i want it to be very sad because the girl im in love with i messed up what we had if someone could write something that was meaning full something about how i messed up and im sorry that would be great. |
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Stacey555
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Joined: Oct 08, 2008
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| Posted: Wed Oct 08, 2008 3:19 pm |
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Hmm... lets see off the top of my head i'll give you a little bit. you can finish it.
I thought we were perfect
but i guess i was wrong
I only have myself to blame
now i'll have to deal with the pain
I'll capture the memories and hold on tight
i knew we'd last i had no doubt
but i was mistaken and left only with this unrequited love...
haha idk i'm having writers block. thats the best i have now. sorry
And my friend is going through the same thing.
Im sure it wasn't your fault.
It would also be easier to write a song if we knew what exactly happened.
Good luck. |
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texter-bernd
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Joined: Sep 05, 2008
Location: Germany
Posts: 64
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| Posted: Wed Oct 22, 2008 1:56 am |
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without you
how could I lie so fluently
how could I treat you like I did
behaving like a naughty kid
how could I fail so totally
like a dry and barren plain
like the desert with no rain
like the last hope dying too
(my) life is without you
how much I must have hurt you then
how much pain I must have caused
only the wrong friends have applaused
I'd never do such things again
like a dry and barren plain
like the desert with no rain
like the last hope dying too
(my) life is without you
how much I wish there was a way
how much I wish I could undo
the nasty things I did to you
and wipe out what I then did say
if you came back - oh, what a feast
champagne and roses, and at least
my promise that I would be true
and always honest towards you
like a dry and barren plain
like the desert with no rain
like the last hope dying too
(my) life is without you
You may use this text as long as you observe the licensing rules, see:
http://bernd-harmsen.de
Bernd |
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texter-bernd
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Joined: Sep 05, 2008
Location: Germany
Posts: 64
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| Posted: Wed Oct 22, 2008 2:02 am |
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I forgot:
if you have a tune to your idea - I am used to writing lyrics to existing compositions (all my "Motorplanet" stuff was written that way.
Well, it's October yet, the summer had come and gone, and so has probably your misery.
Cheers,
Bernd |
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elex
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Joined: Nov 27, 2008
Posts: 82
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| Posted: Sun Apr 19, 2009 10:15 pm |
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| texter-bernd wrote: | without you
how could I lie so fluently
how could I treat you like I did
behaving like a naughty kid
how could I fail so totally
like a dry and barren plain
like the desert with no rain
like the last hope dying too
(my) life is without you
how much I must have hurt you then
how much pain I must have caused
only the wrong friends have applaused
I'd never do such things again
like a dry and barren plain
like the desert with no rain
like the last hope dying too
(my) life is without you
how much I wish there was a way
how much I wish I could undo
the nasty things I did to you
and wipe out what I then did say
if you came back - oh, what a feast
champagne and roses, and at least
my promise that I would be true
and always honest towards you
like a dry and barren plain
like the desert with no rain
like the last hope dying too
(my) life is without you
You may use this text as long as you observe the licensing rules, see:
http://bernd-harmsen.de
Bernd |
This one is good..  |
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