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HenDriX
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Joined: Feb 25, 2007
Location: Iceland
Posts: 2
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| Posted: Mon Mar 12, 2007 12:47 pm |
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gunner
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Joined: Jan 30, 2004
Location: Planet Earth
Posts: 664
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| Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 8:43 pm |
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Im Wriritng this as I listen......
"Escaping Emptiness"
The Intro:
Well, the intro is very close to Metallica's "One" ,only a few BPM's faster.... may not be a good idea to start the song like that...
Vocals:
Hmmmm.....Vocals are really dry...I think a little effects would help, and they are pitchy at times.....
The Song as a Whole:
To repititious, was hoping for a bridge....a chorus..... other than just changing the dynamics of playing the same chords over and over again......
This isnt meant to be a put down...just constructive criticisim.....
I do hear talent in there....just need some tweaking.
Keep at it!!!.... |
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funnyman
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| Posted: Wed Mar 14, 2007 8:42 am |
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with a little corrections like the person said above, you should be fine!!!
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CaseyC
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Joined: Oct 02, 2005
Posts: 18
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| Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 3:39 pm |
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Would be great if you can make the vocals be mixed much closer to the listener! It will gain the song alot.
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