RiCterMan
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Joined: Jun 10, 2005
Location: Madison, OH
Posts: 742
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| Posted: Tue Sep 26, 2006 8:42 pm |
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Hey people...,
It's been a while, but I'm still not writing as much as I used to. I wrote a couple new pieces, but I haven't gotten to posting them yet, and I'm not sure when (if) that'll happen.
But here's one of the first lyrical works I ever worked on (years ago) that I, myself, wrote, and in finishing it, thought, "My writing seems to have improved a bit'." It's actually about me asking whatever dark creature exists, be it Satan or something else, not to compell me to "end me." Back then, I was getting close to some of the worst times of my life, and I would often think about wanting to be gone. So, that's the basic idea... Check it out. It's called, "The Serpent".
"The Serpent"
-Rick, "RiCterMan," Strayer, fecit.
Oh, dear serpent,
please don't tempt me, the
fruit is tempting enough...
Oh, dear serpent,
down to your hole.
Angel, guide me away.
Guide me away....
Oh, dear master,
please don't keep these
feelings inside of me...
Oh, dear angel-
sweet guardian
angel, fly me away.
Fly me away....
Just fly me away.
(Short Interlude, envisioned.)
'Cause I crave the fruit...,
and it looks so ripe.
Show me heaven.
Show me what is right.
Show me what is right.
Just fly me away.
Yes, I crave the fruit...
right in front of me.
My only demon's
staring eyes are right on me.
The serpent
taunts me.
Will I just pass or give in?
-eat the fruit?
EnD
Hope some of you enjoyed these. I gotsta' go. Later!
--RiCk->* |
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