farewell_friends
ubw newbie
Joined: Feb 06, 2006
Location: Canada
Posts: 18
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| Posted: Mon Sep 11, 2006 6:38 am |
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yeah so ive made a myspace for one of my songs  its not rly good cuz it was recoreded on my camera and i sound like a little girl so yeh...imma record it on my 4 track once i fix it haha...so yeah. here the site. www.myspace.com/dannyramez. the lyrics rnt great so im not gunna write them here. heres another one i wrote...i think imma call it crash...i duno. if u have any good titles or feedback pleeasseee let me no. thannkksss
this song is like all played in G, Fm on the verse and then on the chours it goes to a C, G, some weird chord that i have no idea what its called, Em x2. then on the bridge it goes to Em, C, G, D, Em, C, G, weird chord, and then Em. and ends on G and Fm again. its pretty simple but sounds amazing
where are you know?
i'm swimming through this ocean of sound
just believe it, youve got me hooked, on the last string and i
want back what you have took
chorus #1
to every reminder of the past
well lets make this time last
and pull away to our deepest fears
because you have, socially dissapeared.
where are you know?
smiles and laughter, will hide away your mood
but helpless crying, will not improve
sometimes we have the best moments in our dreams
and conjured up the thought of sleeping, eternally
chours #2
dangerous minds cause
dangerous actions
i would give you my heart, but
broken things, aren't that attractive
where am i know?
bridge
i'm not one to complain
but this feelings driving me insane
dont try and make this all ecstatic
because your just a heartbreaking addict
i am so, so confused
broken down, beaten up and used
i told myself that you dont mean anything
but honestly, you mean everything.
where are you know?
ok so feedback homieeezzzz |
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