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personaljesus
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Joined: Jul 10, 2006

Posts: 13
Posted: Sat Jul 15, 2006 12:55 am Reply with quote
This is it
I’ve taken my final stand
Nothing left to tear apart
I’ve fallen to pieces

You’re the only one I want

You’ve won the battle
You’re in my heart
Burned like a thousand suns
Etched so I will never forget

You’ve won me over
Thrown me down
And now I’ve felt the pain
I cannot hurt more than I already do
But you always find a way

You’re the only one I want

Your lies pierce me
As pointless as they are
My hurt changes to love
The scars on my body
Tell of my regret

I feel you more than ever
I want you beside me
Blood has been spilled
My heart has been won over
By someone that doesn’t know I even exist

You’re the only one I want
I WANT FREEDOM
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Optikal_Delusion
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Joined: Aug 22, 2005
Location: Australia
Posts: 73
Posted: Fri Jul 21, 2006 6:35 am Reply with quote
Sounds a bit like Stockholm Syndrome... The actual syndrome, not the Blink 182 song Razz
Good stuff.
Although the amount of syllables are a bit inconsistant, but if u have a melody in your head and the flow works, that's all that matters.
I can't criticize the flow of the lyrics unless I can hear the melody.
Nice work.
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