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personaljesus
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Joined: Jul 10, 2006

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Posted: Sun Jul 09, 2006 11:17 pm Reply with quote

This is it
I’ve taken my final stand
Nothing left to tear apart
I’ve fallen to pieces

You’re the only one I want

You’ve won the battle
You’re in my heart
Burned like a thousand suns
Etched so I will never forget

You’ve won me over
Thrown me down
And now I’ve felt the pain
I cannot hurt more than I already do
But you always find a way

You’re the only one I want

Your lies pierce me
As pointless as they are
My hurt changes to love
The scars on my body
Tell of my regret

I feel you more than ever
I want you beside me
Blood has been spilled
My heart has been won over
By someone that doesn’t know I even exist

You’re the only one I want
I WANT FREEDOM


it's a piece in work and i know it needs more but it's a good start and thats where you guys come in. please anything u wanna say about it do so.
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