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guitargeekfreak
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Posted: Thu Jun 29, 2006 12:36 am Reply with quote

Peace?

All hell has broken loose
Wars upon nations
Everything has turned to damnation
Nobody knows what they're doin'
Everything spilt into confusion
Everything running off a bomb
Ticking away to go
BOOM!

The world is at its end as we know it
There's nothing we can do about it
We complain and polute
But dont even try
We kill to survive
We act so innocent
When we do it every second of our lives
Hypicritocism is a major part of us

Everything is a huge rat race
No one wins
We all lose
Its all violence
No peace
Troubled minds
Troubled hearts
Troubled lives

Everything has turned to damnation
Nobody knows what they're doin'
Everything spilt into confusion
Everything running off a bomb
Ticking away to go
BOOM!

Everything has turned to damnation
Nobody knows what they're doin'
Everything spilt into confusion
Everything running off a bomb
Ticking away to go
BOOM!

Everything has turned to damnation
Nobody knows what they're doin'
Everything spilt into confusion
Everything running off a bomb
Ticking away to go
BOOM!
© 2006 Music of the High
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Aubrii
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Posted: Mon Jul 24, 2006 11:27 am Reply with quote

"All hell has broken loose
Wars upon nations
Everything has turned to damnation
Nobody knows what they're doin'
Everything spilt into confusion "

love this first part, it draws me in to read more and keeps my interest

The only part i think doesn't flow so nicely is when you say "BOOM" i can't think of a better way to end it, but it just seems out of place in the first stanza because usually when that happens its the end. Just a thought

-Aubrii
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