Aubrii
ubw rookie


Joined: Aug 21, 2005
Posts: 152
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| Posted: Fri Jun 23, 2006 11:10 pm |
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just a suggestion, if you mean for the same thing to be said multiple times, you can write it oncec and then put (x2) or (x3) etc. it makes it easier to read. also i know this was probably just a typo but "knobody" is spelled, "nobody" i know, probably just a typo, just wanted to point it out so you can correct it. I like these lyrics, they make me want to read more ^__^ keep up the good work
-Aubrii |
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