ballard of the fallen

ubw newbie Joined: Mar 22, 2006 Posts: 13

sang to the tune of greenpeace by Henry the 8th

i sold the soul i had for beer
on a wisper of choice from Billy i hear
he pushed up close beside my ear
and promised me riches in pride for fear
i took what he had on the toss of a coin
o twice it fliped for forces to join
he played me true a king for pawn
sure his empty promise left me forlawn
i was cast from the grace of the God up above
i lost me life and with it me love
now my fists dont work and i fear the glove
i cant be no more ,sure he tricked me good
now my past aint mine and me soul anit strong
theres no God for a man who goes wrong
i broke me word and to change that i long
now im down with the dogs , sure thats where i belong
for i sold to the man where the fallen go
n,ere to bask in what the noble know
and if theres redemption sure il give me whole
just to bask in that truth that the noble know

Posted: Fri Jun 09, 2006 5:55 pm

"Ballard" isn't a word that I'm aware of. Did you mean ballad? "Forlawn" is also not a word. Did you mean forlorn? The style is good, but you really have to work on the grammar, man.

ubw newbie Joined: Mar 22, 2006 Posts: 13

i think ure missing the point Virabhadra but thanks for the comment

Posted: Sat Jun 10, 2006 11:23 am

I guess I am. Care to explain?

ubw newbie Joined: Mar 22, 2006 Posts: 13

it doesnt matter if the words are spelt wrong.

Posted: Sun Jun 11, 2006 10:37 am

Tell that to your English teacher.

Seriously.. did you intentionally misspell them or are you just being defensive? If you intentionally misspelled them, what's the reason behind it?

ubw newbie Joined: Mar 22, 2006 Posts: 13

i didnt write it for my english teacher. i didnt intentionly misspell them i just did, its the meaning that matters.

ballard of the fallen

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