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E2
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Joined: May 20, 2006
Posts: 44
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| Posted: Mon Jun 05, 2006 5:42 pm |
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This may be the worst thing I have ever written but it only toke me 15 mins to write so tell me what you think.
It’s funny how life is sometimes
Making sure to remind you about your crimes
Days where you can be on top
But then one day you can drop
People making sure to point out your flaws
And it never seems like they have cause
Never knowing what to say
Because your words can haunt you some day
It takes some a lifetime to figure this out
But me I went a different route
Seeing only what I believe
May make me naïve
But it sure makes life an ease
~E2~
Like I said tell me what you think. I know it's not the best poem I posted but I would still like input. |
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E2
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Joined: May 20, 2006
Posts: 44
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| Posted: Mon Jun 05, 2006 11:42 pm |
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Hey people, if you could do me a fav. Please if you read my poem leave a comment. Thanks |
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RiCterMan
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Joined: Jun 10, 2005
Location: Madison, OH
Posts: 742
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| Posted: Thu Jun 08, 2006 7:52 pm |
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Hey...
It's not bad writing, though it's not incredible either... The emotion is there, and personally, I can relate to your words. It's definitely written from the heart. Keep writing and sharing, my friend... I'm not on here as much as I used to be, but when I am, I try to respond to other people's contributions. Later!
--RiCk->* |
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E2
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| Posted: Thu Jun 08, 2006 7:58 pm |
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Thanks for the comment. If you get some time read my other stuff. |
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RiCterMan
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Joined: Jun 10, 2005
Location: Madison, OH
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| Posted: Sat Jun 10, 2006 6:12 pm |
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If I do, I shall look at more... I've been very busy as of late, but I love to read new posts. Later! |
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