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E2
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Joined: May 20, 2006
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| Posted: Tue May 30, 2006 10:35 pm |
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Ok this poem is no where done but tell me what you think of it so far. This poem has no name yet but it's about my mom.
Mom you’re my angle from above
Showing me nothing but love
Wrapping me in your wings when I was afraid
A love like yours will never fade
You showed what it meant to be strong
And always there when something was wrong
You and I had our good days and bad days
But you never ceased to amaze
You worked every day all day
But still found energy to play
If anyone ever met you they would see
Words can’t even explain what you mean to me |
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Aubrii
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Joined: Aug 21, 2005
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| Posted: Wed May 31, 2006 5:23 am |
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lol! ok angel, not angle. This is so sweet, your mom is so lucky  Maybe you should title it something like, "Dear Mom" or "this is for you" or something like that.
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E2
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| Posted: Sun Jun 04, 2006 4:47 pm |
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My bad. But thanks for the ideas. I'll be puting more of my writings on later so look for them. |
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