rocker_gal
ubw newbie
Joined: Mar 03, 2006
Posts: 28
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| Posted: Fri May 19, 2006 2:44 am |
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I cry into my pillow,
Thoughts running through my head,
I wish I was not here today,
I wish that I were dead.
Silent tears fall,
From my eyes,
No truth resides,
Only shallow lies.
I see myself standing,
Above my own grave,
No tears fall from my eyes,
I must stand and be brave.
A long painful struggle,
I’m falling apart,
My dreams are all fading,
I need a new start.
I wish I was dead,
I wish I wasn’t here,
To feel my pain,
To feel all my fear.
Me, me,
Who am I now,
I’m the stupid b**ch
Who made you fall.
So kill me now,
So black my eyes,
I do not care,
How it is I die.
So kill me quick,
And kill me now,
I want you to know,
The pain I feel. |
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Aubrii
ubw rookie
Joined: Aug 21, 2005
Posts: 152
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| Posted: Fri May 19, 2006 7:08 am |
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"Silent tears fall,
From my eyes,
No truth resides,
Only shallow lies"
i really like this line for some reason. Good work Rocker Gal. It's a little depressing, but that's the purpose and you conveyed that very well. You stayed on topic and caught my attention
-Aubrii |
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